Clap clap why didn't you show me this in the group, or did you and i missed it? XD
Clap clap why didn't you show me this in the group, or did you and i missed it? XD
lol it's not my best song because of the annoying reeverb on it
awesome song... nuff said!
Yeah!!!! Thanks bro))
the intro piano was too sudden, it was a great bass, the vocals were good the only problem i had with them was the fact that everything was over powering the vocals, but it could be personal preference, great break down, and good selection of sounds, badass song!
My intent was to make sure that the vocals were not too loud, nor too quiet, but I've to confess that I had issues mixing the instruments on this one so there are improvements that could be made. Thank you for your feedback!
this is well done, amazing balance, nothing over shadows, the instruments don't over power each other, the voice is perfect, it sounds as if you knew exactly what you wanted, the most important thing i can think of in cinematic songs, is to make sure that the song can set and image in their mind, that they can visualize the scene you are making, or that they can relate their own... great work!
I agree with you, it is important to make sure that the song can set and create an image in the audiences mind, it doesn't necessarily have to be mine as people have their own perspectives while listening to something like this. Thank you for your feedback, I appreciate it!
it felt empty in a way, i can definitely imagine this in a slow picture scene, such as fire works, but it just doesn't quite fill in that necessary feeling, the ending added up really well, and the background was well placed, its enjoyable but feels like its missing some core components, good work tho!
I understand what you're saying, and I thank you for taking the time to really pick this apart and giving me some feedback! Honestly, I did try to make this song sound empty, or bare, having a certain somberness or longing feeling, the fireworks being referenced in the beginning along with the sparkler clip. But thanks for your feedback again, it will not go unnoticed!
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Seriously what is funny ?
awesome that's all that is needed to be said//
its really good haven't heard this sort of trance in awhile, man i miss this, LOL
have to agree with what Deshiel and TasyTeo are saying, except i liked the drums... take their advice and TastyTeo if you liked my War Forest ill make another in that range XD
Edited it Hopping its better
the point was an intro not a rap song or some random lyrics...it introduces the group and it was intended to get people interested, don't get me wrong i like your suggestion but do you really see a rapper with that song?? i would understand some very selective vocals because of the beats and the melody was meant to go with the voice...
Definativly He is right !
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